Breathe in
a face, a place, a voice
breathe out.
A touch, a scent,
the colour of the sky
in the blink of an eye.
A fleeting memory
hurried past,
as I walked away.
So we parted,
set each our way
The memory and I.
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13 comments:
Wow.. so nice and beautiful. You sure know how to use very li'l words to express a lot, ne..? =D
Great work again Scribbler! ^__^
PS:Add this also to your poem collection, the one you will (have to) publish in the future. =D
Good to know that you're moving on..:)
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Yes, I agree with Harumi. You are great at saying SO much with a few words. You SHOULD publish your poems. I will be the first to get a signed copy! :D
@ Spring: nope, that'd be me! lol I've been asking her to do so since ages I think.. hehe..
@ Scribbler: Don't blame me.. but I've added you for the tagging challenge.. =D check it here.. =D
@Harumi: Aw well..I'll let you have the first copy then! But guess I'll have to pass on your tagging challange..coz I have only you and Sribbler to tag back. That would be a bit too tedious for you I think. :)
@ Spring: Sorry I missed this. It's ok. I'm sure the game will come around another time. Or else.. we can come up with even a better tagging game next time.. ne? =D So no worries.. ^__^
Aw, I'm being fought over! lol.. well, not exactly, but I like to think so :D
Umm.. Harumi, sorry about the tagging challenge - same reasons as Springflower!
@ Scribbler: didn't see you in ages! how's everything out there? Heard from Spring that your uni courses are all done. Do post something once in a while for us to know what you've been up to.. ^__^
Harumi! I've missed you. I'm afraid I've been neglecting this blog, well, blogs as a whole and writing. Well, did have a 2-week break, I'm still trying to think what else I did over it, apart from working on my project!
i simply love it...u shud write more u knw..its not like u have to go to the rooftop no.. :P
Haha.. true, true, Carl. Unlike some people I know.
hehe.. really? Well that's ok.. it's good to see you back. And don't worry, I'm sure you'll have tons of things to write about.. when you find some time to do so.. ^__^
oh and you can start writing about your interesting project too.. =D
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